Lost
why’d you have to leave me baby when times got tuff?
i say why’d you have to leave me baby when times got tuff?
or did you think it would help us both.
would you take back what you’ve done if you had the chance?
i say would you take back what you’ve done if you had the
chance?
or would you just stare into my tearfilled eyes without a
word.
done too much thought of you i cant sleep
i say done too much thought of you i can’t sleep
but when i thinks baby, i done well on my own.
why’d you have to leave me baby when times got tuff?
i say why’d you have to leave me baby when times got tuff?
or did you think it would help us both.
I hope the lyric character did well even without the "babe" :-) On a more serious tone, I enjoyed the style very much. The repetition works really well to inspire the melancholic feeling and mood.
ReplyDeleteBest, M.
PS. since I cannot comment with my Name and URL, here is the link to my offering for NaPoWriMo, Day 2: http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/04/deserted-day-2/